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    Fin
    It was the longest and the darkest night
    And all was silent in the lonely streets
    And the dense fog did away with all the light
    The outdoors was a tomb where none dared meet .
    It seemed as though the world had stopped turning
    As if there was nothing worth waiting for
    And in the distance, the world was burning
    Fueled by hatred for man's own neighbor.
    The world is ablaze with one endless fight
    When all people turn against each other
    You notice how alone you are at night
    And we find ourselves killing our brother.
    Friendships are broken, betrayals begin
    And all that I can say to this is fin.

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    I really like that
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    The ability to not have to have the last word is a learned behavior..

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    Default Re: Fin (A Shakespeare Sonnet that i wrote)

    thanks man
    you want to see some of my earlier works?

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    Quote Originally Posted by End Of All View Post
    thanks man
    you want to see some of my earlier works?
    Sure i do
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    The ability to not have to have the last word is a learned behavior..

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    Default Re: Fin (A Shakespeare Sonnet that i wrote)

    The Fall of the Angels

    It was a time
    Of great importance
    And greater sadness.

    The world was at war
    Brother vs. brother
    Sister vs. sister

    And we, the angels
    Far above in the heavens
    Could do nothing but watch.

    The betrayals tore deep into our souls
    As all that we ever knew and loved
    Was slowly destroyed by those we once loved.

    It was the end of everything
    And we, the angels
    Were falling

    Falling down to the Earth
    Returning to the world of the living
    As the living ceased to exist.

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