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    Default Drowning Within Loneliness

    Been a while since I wrote any poetry. I dunno why I was inspired tonight.

    I sit here empty inside
    With no one in my minds eye
    no one within my mind
    no one to call upon when i break down inside
    no one to dry my eyes when i cry
    if i say the lonesome life was ideal...
    It'd be just another lie
    Why am I alone?
    When I need security...
    I need you to blanket me
    Comfort me and caress my stability
    Loneliness must be the epitome of death
    Because with one inside my soul
    I die a little everyday
    I crumble inside
    I seem to waste away.
    The drudgery of the masquerade I display
    Trying to uphold a fallacy from day to day
    It just drags me down
    With no soul to cling to
    Slowly I drown
    I suffocate on this loneliness
    Muffled screams of yearning
    Seep from every orifice...
    Love would be so glorious
    If only I could find her
    For now I sit and dwell on it
    and this this as a reminder...

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    Default Re: Drowning Within Loneliness

    The sentiments of the poem I daresay a few will find empathy with.
    A new life awaits you in the off-world colonies! A chance to begin again in a golden land of opportunity and adventure!

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    Default Re: Drowning Within Loneliness

    Defecating Polar Bears? Really!? haha...Now that's funny! I like it! Oh yeah, the poem is pretty intriguing; One can appreciate the pain your poem shares...

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