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Old 12-21-2006, 11:18 AM   #1
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Default Shine of the moon

Shine of the moon

The scarlet circle sinks down
In to the ocean ground
A white beam of hope I captured
Guess what, it still remains in my bones

Yester night I glared in the sky
Asking it to rain soon
Clouds replied we are covering a face
Shimmering shine of the moon

Creamy face stare at me from a distance
A distance of unknowing measures
Measure oh so near
I no more fear

Now I can see so clean and clear
Beneath are the clouds of monsoon
In front of me is your face
And the shimmering shine of the moon

Oh moon a distant morning has come
Oh moon we will meet again
In the space dark and hollow
Oh moon let it rain
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Old 12-21-2006, 09:57 PM   #2
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It is very good sam, There is a lot of thought in these words.
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Sounds like you put allot of effort into your work. Good job.
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Old 12-22-2006, 07:32 AM   #4
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Thanks credit goes to Silent anyways ... EL and LEMON shud also start seriously with these writtings ... Open thy EL-BAGGO
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