lemon

the darkness falls
cloathing the walls
filling with fear
i turn to hear

nothing but silence
graphic scenes of violence
pattern the walls
where the darkness falls

the wolves begin their calls
jumping into the fray
pouncing on newfound prey
when the darkness falls

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if you want to find a meaning - be my guest. i just wrote it in under a minute. it took me longer to write this little note than to write the poem.

SilentEyz

Well be there a meaning behind it or not.. It is still good writing,

And for the record, Mine all have meaning, and most are written without much time involved. Your thoughts are in your words, even if they have no implecation behind them.


Thanks for sharing Lemon.

lemon

heh, thanks. but it aint the one that will never grace the hard drive that holds the database of threads and posts that represents the offtopicz.com server space

SilentEyz

Yeah, maybe not..but you posted it. and that is what counts *weg*

Sam

Lemon, well it won't be wrong if I say u have done a marvellous job ...

basically my call for ur poem will be like u have beautifully synchornised " characteristics of FEAR "...

will be good to see something new and bold from u Lemon ..

Sam

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