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Old 12-06-2006, 04:52 PM   #1
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The look in your eyes
Tells me somethings wrong
You just look away
And say forget it
We're drifting apart
Whats happening to us
Your eyes used to make me see
That you were the one for me
You dont kiss me tenderly anymore
Telling me you dont love me
Your hugs are no longer tight
Meaning you want to let me go
We dont walk together
Meaning its going to end
Whats happening to us
Whats going on
Then i see it one day,
As i'm coming home from work
You were there kissing another girl
I drove right past like i didnt see
That night when you came by
I told you to leave,
Thats when you saw
The rage in my eyes
You knew then that i knew
You left without saying a word
Thats the end of you and me
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very strong words.. and very well put.. Thanks for sharing
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The look in your eyes
Tells me somethings wrong
You just look away
And say forget it
We're drifting apart
Whats happening to us
Your eyes used to make me see
That you were the one for me
You dont kiss me tenderly anymore
Telling me you dont love me
Your hugs are no longer tight
Meaning you want to let me go
We dont walk together
Meaning its going to end
Whats happening to us
Whats going on
OMG...its so sad ....i see some of this in something I have...I know the feeling...not saying its going to end...but I know that feeling well

Very good poem...very sad
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