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Old 12-05-2006, 02:58 PM   #1
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I saw this and thought it was beautiful!



My Treasure - For Mom

by Kit McCallumI

look back on these years
To see how far I've come and grown,
I take a trip down memory lane,
And what I see has shown ...

That every step I've taken,
You have been there by my side ...
From infancy to adulthood,
We've stood the test of time.

You cradled me and nurtured me,
Through all these many years;
You held me and did comfort me,
Through happiness and tears.

You'd pick me up when I would fall,
You'd dust me off and then,
Encourage me to get back on
That horse and ride again.

Your constant care and loving,
And your warm inviting heart,
Has always been a treasure that
I knew would n'er depart.

If I could be "just half" the person
You have been to me ...
Then you have taught me well dear mom,
For in my heart I see ...

A woman whose most gentle soul,
Embraces me each day ...
A woman whom I dearly love,
Much more than words can say.

Poems on Life - Family Poems - My Treasure - For Mom by Kit McCallum
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Old 12-05-2006, 05:08 PM   #2
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that is beautful
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Old 12-05-2006, 08:14 PM   #3
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I love it V. its beautiful
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V.
thanks for sharing that, it does bring back some treasured memories.
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I read that differently than most of you, I think.

It is beautiful, I just find it really upsetting, is all.

Thank you for sharing it, though.
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fantastic ............. very well said
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