Poetry Battle... - Page 2

SouthOfHeaven · 09-06-2008, 05:03 PM

lmao u

dazner · 09-09-2008, 04:46 PM

bump...

Valentin · 09-09-2008, 05:33 PM

I like lemons. I like aid.
Lemonade diet.
Shall bring great success.

dazner · 09-09-2008, 05:34 PM

second time you've posted that??????

Valentin · 09-09-2008, 05:38 PM

The first time i posted it from my cell phone, so didn't get the phrasing right.

dazner · 09-09-2008, 05:47 PM

I think you still missed it...lol..

Valentin · 09-09-2008, 05:53 PM

No.

I like lemons. I like aid.

Pause

Lemonade diet.

Pause

Shall bring great success.

GoDzMaRiNe · 09-10-2008, 10:36 PM

Here are a few "spits"/ "raps" I have done on another site:

I listen to vibes and hear punchlines- crunch time like munch rhymes - bloody like lunch dimes or hunch signs- I throw verbs with birds while I blow herbs which flow words and show nerds how to throw curves/ Yeaa my grammar is off the chain - gets my glamour which gets me brain which gets me drain’d then I slammer 'slam-her' with the vein and manner off with the cane and rain “like shampagne”/ haha yes I rep high - I step over the sky I automatically fly - you need to break your neck to see eye to eye - I feed when I shake my tech when I say bye- I bleed then I take a sec -die- come back to life /hit teh deck convert verbals and fry- Im feelin more weather then the weather guy- Im so G - Im so me- I spit plasma call me SONY- Im the one and only - Take a knee and blow me-

My name is Godzmarine,
Hottest Game ever seen, fuck it - ever been- Styles fresh like an “april scene”- I cut paper like how a “staple lean” - Im sweet’ness I spit maple all over the screen- Im the unmistakable been - untraceable teen- Only cat to spit -Hawt flows with cold words- and hit thirds -inbetween- while rippin up “back spleens”- dayum / I “chop minds” and “drop finds” when I “stop time”, I spit colours into words to “top blinds” - have rainbows appearing in lines -shiit!/ I cant take it! I get verbals clogging in my brain - I blow hurdles when im jogging in my lane! -i Open my mouth and groan when I glow in pain- I spit flows which are nothin less then insane- I ripple clouds and spit holy water when im rolling n flowing in game- like im rolling in iced out chain- I eat rappers- that includes Lil wayne- haha

dazner · 09-11-2008, 12:41 PM

hmmm wanna text battle?

and I don't mean poetry either....

Valentin · 09-11-2008, 12:45 PM

Sure.

Lightening bolt. Lightening bolt.

Valentin · 09-11-2008, 12:50 PM

Scientology
Takes a lot from me
Financialy

Scientology
Gives a lot to me
In spirituality

Scientology
Makes me me
It's a part of me

Scientology
Completes me
Whole-heartedly

GoDzMaRiNe · 09-11-2008, 01:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dazner

hmmm wanna text battle?

and I don't mean poetry either....

Hit me up homi

How many bars/lines? or unlimited.

dazner · 09-11-2008, 05:35 PM

naw we should limit shit it can be quick 4 bar hit or we can go something like 8 bars your choice if you want...

let me know due date and rules..

No Recycling, No flipping, No biting etc..

Valentin · 09-11-2008, 06:40 PM

Can i text battle too?

wednesday · 09-11-2008, 06:44 PM

ok, check me lyrics peepholes...stand back, give me space

have you ever seen a bunny...
and his nose is very runny..
dont think its funny,,
cuz itsnot

Hell yer...<bows....hahhahaha

09-06-2008, 05:03 PM	#16
SouthOfHeaven Anti-Social Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Why do you wanna know? STALKER! Posts: 10,809 Tokenz: 7,812	Re: Poetry Battle... lmao u __________________ *May all your ups and* downs be in *bed*.

09-09-2008, 04:46 PM	#17
dazner Who you'd like to be! Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 3,596 Tokenz: 4,993	Re: Poetry Battle... bump... __________________ Wanna Get Away? I'm a Rapper, Father and Husband which means a Poet, Leader and ATM

09-09-2008, 05:33 PM	#18
Valentin Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: London Posts: 467	Re: Poetry Battle... I like lemons. I like aid. Lemonade diet. Shall bring great success.

09-09-2008, 05:34 PM	#19
dazner Who you'd like to be! Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 3,596 Tokenz: 4,993	Re: Poetry Battle... second time you've posted that?????? __________________ Wanna Get Away? I'm a Rapper, Father and Husband which means a Poet, Leader and ATM

09-09-2008, 05:38 PM	#20
Valentin Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: London Posts: 467	Re: Poetry Battle... The first time i posted it from my cell phone, so didn't get the phrasing right.

09-09-2008, 05:47 PM	#21
dazner Who you'd like to be! Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 3,596 Tokenz: 4,993	Re: Poetry Battle... I think you still missed it...lol.. __________________ Wanna Get Away? I'm a Rapper, Father and Husband which means a Poet, Leader and ATM

09-09-2008, 05:53 PM	#22
Valentin Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: London Posts: 467	Re: Poetry Battle... No. I like lemons. I like aid. Pause Lemonade diet. Pause Shall bring great success.

09-10-2008, 10:36 PM	#23
GoDzMaRiNe Still a newbie Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Canada Posts: 72 Tokenz: 1,262	Re: Poetry Battle... Here are a few "spits"/ "raps" I have done on another site: I listen to vibes and hear punchlines- crunch time like munch rhymes - bloody like lunch dimes or hunch signs- I throw verbs with birds while I blow herbs which flow words and show nerds how to throw curves/ Yeaa my grammar is off the chain - gets my glamour which gets me brain which gets me drain’d then I slammer 'slam-her' with the vein and manner off with the cane and rain “like shampagne”/ haha yes I rep high - I step over the sky I automatically fly - you need to break your neck to see eye to eye - I feed when I shake my tech when I say bye- I bleed then I take a sec -die- come back to life /hit teh deck convert verbals and fry- Im feelin more weather then the weather guy- Im so G - Im so me- I spit plasma call me SONY- Im the one and only - Take a knee and blow me- My name is Godzmarine, Hottest Game ever seen, fuck it - ever been- Styles fresh like an “april scene”- I cut paper like how a “staple lean” - Im sweet’ness I spit maple all over the screen- Im the unmistakable been - untraceable teen- Only cat to spit -Hawt flows with cold words- and hit thirds -inbetween- while rippin up “back spleens”- dayum / I “chop minds” and “drop finds” when I “stop time”, I spit colours into words to “top blinds” - have rainbows appearing in lines -shiit!/ I cant take it! I get verbals clogging in my brain - I blow hurdles when im jogging in my lane! -i Open my mouth and groan when I glow in pain- I spit flows which are nothin less then insane- I ripple clouds and spit holy water when im rolling n flowing in game- like im rolling in iced out chain- I eat rappers- that includes Lil wayne- haha __________________ I train myself to fight an army, so no man can break me

09-11-2008, 12:41 PM	#24
dazner Who you'd like to be! Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 3,596 Tokenz: 4,993	Re: Poetry Battle... hmmm wanna text battle? and I don't mean poetry either.... __________________ Wanna Get Away? I'm a Rapper, Father and Husband which means a Poet, Leader and ATM

09-11-2008, 12:45 PM	#25
Valentin Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: London Posts: 467	Re: Poetry Battle... Sure. Lightening bolt. Lightening bolt.

09-11-2008, 12:50 PM	#26
Valentin Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: London Posts: 467	Re: Poetry Battle... Scientology Takes a lot from me Financialy Scientology Gives a lot to me In spirituality Scientology Makes me me It's a part of me Scientology Completes me Whole-heartedly

09-11-2008, 05:35 PM	#28
dazner Who you'd like to be! Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 3,596 Tokenz: 4,993	Re: Poetry Battle... naw we should limit shit it can be quick 4 bar hit or we can go something like 8 bars your choice if you want... let me know due date and rules.. No Recycling, No flipping, No biting etc.. __________________ Wanna Get Away? I'm a Rapper, Father and Husband which means a Poet, Leader and ATM

09-11-2008, 06:40 PM	#29
Valentin Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: London Posts: 467	Re: Poetry Battle... Can i text battle too?

09-11-2008, 06:44 PM	#30
wednesday Prozac Princess Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: In da chemist..... Posts: 11,200 Tokenz: 22,669	Re: Poetry Battle... ok, check me lyrics peepholes...stand back, give me space have you ever seen a bunny... and his nose is very runny.. dont think its funny,, cuz itsnot Hell yer...<bows....hahhahaha __________________ Thanks to Peter.....

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