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Old 08-04-2008, 03:43 PM   #1
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My stress can be relieved again
I've gone back to the knife
And as I carve into my skin
Alongside blood escapes worry

So satisfying is this torture
As the razor reaches my leg
It cuts into my skin with malice
And a gasp of pain is held back

Another slit
Another slash
And crimson rivers flowing

So long I'd left my skin untouched
And every single wound healed up
But that caused so much more anguish
With torment just building up inside

I tried so hard to carry on
Without giving into the blade
But that proved to be just to hard
And now I can slice once again

Another slit
Another slash
And crimson rivers flowing

I have become so accomplished
At hiding my suffering
All of my peers think I'm happy
And that all my smiles are real

They do not know what happends to me
When that door has been locked shut
They do not see the gushing scarlet
That trickles down my damaged leg

Another slit
Another slash
And crimson rivers flowing
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Old 08-04-2008, 03:45 PM   #2
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this would make a very beautiful song.. once again so sad..
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Thankyou (:
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its a nice poem, good job
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