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08-04-2008, 03:42 PM
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Tokenz: 12,323   |  Flower Of The Damned.. Please Comment The crimson bloom Of sorrowed hearts Gentle touch The bruising starts Tender petals, Silken tears, Fragile glisten, Trembling fears. Wrapped in wire, Coiled in thorns, A tortured crown The bloom adorns. Dewdrops captured Reaching out Through the pain Between the doubt Twixt the tendrils Coiled and thorned, Past the sting Of living scorned Poised upon A velvet leaf, Fragile, Balanced, Shining, Brief, Till from crimson Grace it slips, Plummets as The petal dips, Spent so brief And vanished so, Leaves the thickened Thorns to grow Like an armor Round the bloom, Vibrant visions Sundered doom, Left to wilt From ravished hour, Such the fate Of distant flower x |
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08-04-2008, 03:43 PM
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| Anti-Social  Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Why do you wanna know? STALKER!
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Tokenz: 7,787 | Re: Flower Of The Damned.. Please Comment wow.. very sad.. but beautiful
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10-01-2008, 10:40 PM
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Tokenz: 2,534 | Re: Flower Of The Damned.. Please Comment This is beautiful!! I'd love to hear what it all means to you 
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10-02-2008, 01:09 AM
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Tokenz: 19,607 | Re: Flower Of The Damned.. Please Comment thats was ...deep... really lovely!
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10-21-2008, 02:15 PM
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Tokenz: 12,323 | Re: Flower Of The Damned.. Please Comment Thankyou So Much Guys
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