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Old 07-30-2008, 10:59 PM   #1
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Default SOme poetry I have done as of late

Why do these thoughts
Keep floating thru my head?
All of these things,
Words that are never said.
This fairytale that was written,
never to be finished.
Is it over and done,
or is it purely something wished?
Was the last chapter penned?
Was the last page read?
This fairytale seems to be finished,
long before it began.
I don't know what to say.
I can't figure out what to do.
I'm so lost right now.
I'm still in love with you............
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Old 07-31-2008, 12:52 AM   #2
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Very emotional...nice!
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Wow Drew thats really lovelly, well done! xxxx
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Cheers I'm on my second slab
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