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Old 11-06-2007, 06:31 PM   #1
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Minute of your Time
written by Boomer
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somebody help me I need a shoulder to stand man
This world got me beat up, Im hodin a white sheet up with weary hands
can, we walk for a bit? Im feelin hung up, can we talk for a bit.
Theres alot goin on and my brain stays spinin
Im so turned around, some how I dont know how to start from tha beginin.
I was winin, on top of life and in gods graces
when things turned for worst and I misplaced it.
So I been looking around. In cubbords, closets and it cant be found.
leavin the house, looking at the ground. Thinking somehow if I trace my steps. It should be around.
But no dice, it gone Im at a loss. I felt burn in my chest. Now here comes the cost
Im lost wandering in a daze. Cant find my way home, my heart dont know where it stays
you may say, what could make a grown man feel this way.
Look my way, peer into the eyes of man that lost his faith
no more magic, life lost its shine. Im telling you this, cause I wish this fate wasnt mine.
Dont make the mistake of losing something so precious
From the faithless to the faithfull, from the better to the bested.
No matter what in life dont get restless.
cause someone up above has got his eye on you.
Not to spy on you, but to guide you through.
Thank you for your shoulder and letting me walk with you.
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Oh, that's nice. I always enjoy Boomer's poetry. Interesting style.
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