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Old 07-06-2007, 03:00 PM   #1
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The first time I looked into your eyes they were full of pain
The first time I saw you your parent’s were holding you tight
The first time I saw you they did not know what was wrong
The first time I saw you was at the hospital

The next time I saw you they tried to ease your pain
The next time I saw you they had given you chemo
The next time I saw you they had done everything they could
The next time I saw you your parent’s were holding you tight

The last time I saw you were at peace
The last time I saw you your parent’s were crying tears of pain and joy
Pain because they would never hold you again
Joy because you were finally at peace
The last time I saw you were only 3
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Old 07-06-2007, 03:03 PM   #2
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Thats very very good but also sad too
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Dude that was pretty awesome. Didn't know you had it in you.
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wow. Personal.

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Thank's like I told Amy it was what I was feeling at the moment.
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Damn... that is really deep. Im sorry for your loss
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Old 07-06-2007, 06:38 PM   #7
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Steve that gave me chills because we see that way too much dont we hun? Rep even though its so sad but true
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