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| Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: CT
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Tokenz: 4,067 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | I want more than this...more than meets the eye. I want you to hold me; even when i even cry. I want the sun to shine, on days the tears fall down like rain. And when im standing in the crowd; let me in. I want you to come to bed and hold me through the night. I want you to tell me its ok, tell me my life is worth while. Tell me all my past mistakes dont make you sick. Tell me you love who I am... no matter what. Tell me... Show me... Help me... grow. Can you hear my anger... Can you stop the pain. All this pain..pouring down like rain. Can you change my mind. Bring me back in time. Show me all my doubts... are worth fighting now. Show me love. Show me passion. Show me lifes not just one way. Please wont you hear my cry... before i die inside. Please forgive me. For i know not what i do... Please look past this. The shame that i include. Save me now... Show me how to live. Show me love is true. Show me how to forgive all i have done. Ignore this cry... ignore the foolishness inside, please wont you. Ignore all that i am... all that i do. please wont you... |
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| Moderator Staff Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Hot Springs Arkansas
Posts: 20,802
Tokenz: 12,129 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | That is so good! What you just wrote is exactly how I have been feeling. ![]() |
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| V.I.P User Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 2,529
Tokenz: 696 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | you have a way with words... many hugs |
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| V.I.P User Join Date: Jun 2006
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Tokenz: 1,299 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | ehh.. I dunno, I dont think I could Ever Ignore you ![]() But going Beyond the Title here..lol What Can I say, I Love reading everything you write, because you put so much of your heart into it. |
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| Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: CT
Posts: 8,148
Tokenz: 4,067 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | lol leave it to you silent to make me laugh at this glad yall liked it though honestly |
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| V.I.P User Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: The country of California
Posts: 2,475
Tokenz: 1,835 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Great writing, Kat. I remember feeling like this so many times before. I'm just so glad my wife accepts and loves me for who and what I am, eventhough my weaknesses, I feel, would send her running away.
__________________ When I post, please don't read; I have no idea what I'm saying! |
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| V.I.P User Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: between a rock and a hard place
Posts: 1,747
Tokenz: 1,096 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | damn girl *awestruck by your talent*
__________________ Some of us are born human, the rest of us, we spend a lifetime getting there. |
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| Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Houston Texas
Posts: 14,317
Tokenz: 16,853 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | WOW Kat! Very nice!
__________________ ![]() Horseman #4 Fuckos!!! |
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| King Of Cunts Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Harlow, Essex, England
Posts: 24,137
Tokenz: 48,367 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Let it all out. Good words!
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| Banned Join Date: Jan 2007
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Wow, just wow... |
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