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Old 01-15-2007, 02:51 AM   #1
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Default tears of death ( plz read excptaly people who like my poems

Tears of gold

tears of silver
tears of bronze
tears can be cried at anytime
when your sad mad happy glad it doesnt matter
Tears come and start from the heart

Tear silently drip from my eyes as i wipe away my sorrow
Try and push it away but yet another day i suffer
the pain the nightmears
the endless hours i lye here thinking
why am i on this earth
Why was i meant to be like this
Why was my life screwed from the start
why am i thinkinh of death and the pain that this life brings to me
Why should i cry another tear a wasted tear falls into my pillow as i lye here
close my eyes s the tears run down my face as i stand from my bed and walk to the balconie door
i open the door and jump
tears race my body is sweating my heart is beating faster then before as i awake from a nightmear just as before the pain i go through will never end but with people like you ( all y friends on here) i think i will last till the very end!!



MOst of that is true but some of the really scary parts like the jumping part is just something i put in it
i wrote this poem to tell you guys that most of you are the reason im still hanging on
i love yall


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Default Re: tears of death ( plz read excptaly people who like my poems

I think, from reading your words, that you are an extremly gentle Heart, And as wonderful as that is, it can be just as painful.

But, as seen in your words, Not just this poem, but many of the poems you right, You have a strength inside you to overcome these inner pains. and Fight.

Very Beautiful.. Thank you
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