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01-14-2007, 04:55 AM
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Tokenz: 960   |  Beacons in the Darkness Beacons in the Darkness A smooth summer mist A calm winter snow Its not what we do Its not where we go Its the memories we share The stories that weve told The hardships that weve suffered The advdntures to unfold The paths that weve chosen The way the roads turn and split Like beacons in the darkness, Our hearts will remain lit El-luko 14/01/07 ---- Yeah, its pretty mushy. I whipped it up just this second so I dont mind a little effective criticism. 
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01-14-2007, 06:30 PM
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Tokenz: 1,287 | Re: Beacons in the Darkness Actually Elluko... Its very nice, Told you that you had it in ya. |
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01-15-2007, 12:27 AM
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Tokenz: 139 | Re: Beacons in the Darkness Thats really good ( yeah im back) but wow I like that ! |
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01-15-2007, 04:24 AM
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Tokenz: 960 | Re: Beacons in the Darkness My inner poetickiness has finally revealed itself! lol, thanks guys
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