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Old 01-05-2007, 12:11 AM   #1
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The first time I saw you
There arose a feeling in me
One I never knew before
Strangly exotic
But fear tread over
Your face locked in my mind
Suddenly you were everywhere
Seemingly yet, you were nowhere
Your presence grew stronger
Everytime our visions crossed
Slowly you became my only reality
The world around a senseless multitude
Like a mist of early morning dew
Fading farther into oblivion
Fading until only your face
Becomes my entire existence.


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I like it Silent. I remember always feeling like that growing up.

**Since I'm still growing up, (even at 43, he, he!!), I still know that feeling. Yesterday, I went to a skating rink with my daughter and there was this girl, OMG, she was so cute! Her face has stayed with me for.....well, actually today; I can still picture her face.
Auuurrrrrgghh, sometimes I hate lust!
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